Unfinished Two Page Spread Comments

I decided to try out some of the ideas that the people suggested for my Two Page Spread. First was the red and black idea:



This did look good but I felt it was too rocky, especially with the colour connotations from the red and black, so I ultimately decided not to go with this idea.

Next was the white, torn notes option:


I liked this idea a lot, I agree the yellow was too harsh and it wasn't set out in a visually pleasing manner. The white constrasts with the black and white background and aids in the house-style I tried to create.